Love is like the warmth of the sun;
Radiating rivers of energy to all growing things.
Sweet joy, childlike hope,
The central source of human existence;
Committed to provide each day.
Love is like candies.
Sugar coated, colourful poisons.
Impractical, unhealthy, and expirable;
The rush of wild satisfaction,
Comes the painful aches, restlessness and regrets.
Love is like the sky.
Open and vast, deep and wide.
It envelopes you into its magical height.
A surprise rainbow after the storm;
A convenant of unconditional giving.
Love is like a dream.
Untouchable, uncontrollable, non-existent.
A reminiscent of the past,
But no guarantee of the future.
An ending nobody can foresee.
*Nice poem.
ReplyDeleteAs I read through it, I felt I really see the different scenery about love. The picture is sweet.
I enjoy reading your poem because it touches my heart. Love can bring happiness also can bring pain and disaster.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this a lot. I saw many images in my head as I read through this, and the picture is a nice illustration of how love is like candy.
ReplyDeleteit's a very beauty piece. Love it ;D
ReplyDeleteafter reading this, I want to eat candy
ReplyDeleteWhat a great poem! I thought the comparison with the candies was perfect. Do continue to write creative responses to literature. It makes for enjoyable reading
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